Tuesday, 29 March 2016

Memoir of a special place

Hamner  was usual enough; it had 
Pools, mini golf, camping grounds, the sunshine 
Over it, and even a small supermarket
I never shopped at. My brother and I
 Did what boys do - wrestled, swam, played mini golf,
Complained about this or that, and scoffed
All the treats we had.
Doing nothing important 


  1. Hi Zinzan it's me Hayden. you have a really good story. you also have great words like scoffed all your treats down. I scoff all my treats down too!

  2. Zinzan it Sounds like what me and my brothers would do if we were at hamner it's a great story it all makes and sense .